Script Feedback

What is Script Consulting?

As a script consultant, my role is to analyse your screenplay and provide detailed feedback on its key elements: story, structure, character arcs, dialogue, themes, and market potential. This feedback is designed to elevate your script, making it stand out to financiers, producers, and distributors.

Why Choose Me?

Here are six essential qualities that define my approach to script consultancy:

Expert Storytelling Insight: I have a deep understanding of story structure, character development, dialogue, and genre conventions. My experience includes dissecting thousands of scripts and working as a film executive in sales and finance.

Industry Knowledge: I stay updated with current market trends and understand what producers and audiences seek, ensuring your script meets industry standards and resonates with its intended audience.

Analytical Precision: My strong analytical skills allow me to break down complex narratives and offer clear, actionable advice to refine and enhance your storytelling.

Empathy and Patience: I approach each script with empathy and patience, recognising that every screenplay is a labour of love and deserving of respectful, thoughtful feedback.

Objective Perspective: Maintaining an objective view, I provide honest, constructive feedback to help writers see their work from an industry perspective and make necessary adjustments.

Professionalism and Reliability: I ensure reliability and consistency in delivering high-quality feedback and support throughout the consultancy process.

Proven Success: My insights have contributed to the success of numerous projects. Here are some notable films whose screenplays I reviewed favourably:

  • CENSOR (2021), Prano Bailey-Bond
  • BOILING POINT (2021), Philip Barantini
  • HERSELF (2020), Phyllida Lloyd
  • SAINT MAUD (2020), Rose Glass
  • SURGE (2020), Aneil Karia
  • SOUND OF METAL (2020), Darius Marder
  • THE LAST TREE (2020), Shola Amoo
  • ORDINARY LOVE (2019), Lisa Barros D’Sa and Glenn Leyburn
  • ETERNAL BEAUTY (2019), Craig Roberts
  • MR. JONES (2019), Agnieszka Holland
  • HOPE GAP (2019), William Nicholson
  • METAL HEART (2018), Hugh O’Conor
  • THE KINDERGARTEN TEACHER (2018), Sara Colangelo
  • CARGO (2017), Ben Howling and Yolanda Ramke
  • NOVITIATE (2017), Maggie Betts
  • TO THE BONE (2017), Marti Noxon
  • LADY MACBETH (2016), William Oldroyd

Get in Touch

Discover my competitive rates and how I can provide expert feedback tailored to your screenplay. Contact me through my website or reach out on LinkedIn.